W'rkncacnter
Hero
...uh. yeah. i agree.It is well written, I like it, but its not getting to the meat of the issue here at all.
What are these species, and what mechanics do they have? Yes we could infer, subjectively, that there are some cultural things going on, maybe a dash of magic, maybe some increased hardiness but if there is no mechanics behind it, its fluff.
Well written, nice structure, evocative, but its fluff, it doesnt nothing for me in play, on the game side.
"Race has no mechanics, what do you play?"
Human.